Thursday, April 25, 2013

Inauguration Criticism



President Barak Obama’s second inauguration speech was watched by over one million people. As a rhetorical critic, one using the Aristotelian method of critical analysis needs to look at several factors. Was the speech forensic, epideictic, or deliberative? How was his delivery? How did he use ethos, pathos, and logos? There is a lot to analyze about the speech critically. My main questions while listening were what he would bring up in terms of national issues, what he would mention from his first term, and if he would insult the republican party or throw any insults in to his speech.
            I found Obama’s speech to be epideictic and deliberative. It was epideictic (dealing with the present, uses forms of praise or blame, seeks to honor or cast dishonor) because  he was addressing his present state as a president who had completed one term and is planning his second term. I think his rhetoric showed an urge to honor not only what he did in his first term but America itself. He praised what a strong nation America is and conveyed his sense of honor in leading the country. The speech was deliberative (addresses the future, seeks to establish expediency, urgency, or harmfulness by proposing a course of action) because Obama addressed the future by mentioning things he would like to improve upon or situations he would like to fix in his second term and alluding to the possible course of action that may start very soon toward achieving his newer goals.
            Obama’s delivery was more plain style for more common people. There were only two sets of references that the common public might not understand. He made a reference to “Seneca Falls and Selma and Stonewall”, referring to various sites of human rights protests. Only someone knowledgeable in the area and American history would understand the references. His speech did send a message of good will, however, it was not as inspirational as it could have been.
            Obama’s logos (logic) was strong. His basic argument outlining his speech and supporting his policy arguments was the fact that America’s constitution is great, and we live in a great land. The fact is, however, that modern America needs to adjust to the current times. This was evident as a theme when he spoke about some of the things he plans to do in his second term. This current attitude mixed with hi policy ideas ended up being some of his argument. Things that he brought up like equal pay and gay rights should be rights as human beings, and our government needs to catch up with that. He said at one point, “While these truths may be self-evident, they’ve never been self-executing…For the American people can no more meet the demands of today’s world by acting along than American soldiers could have met the forces of fascism or communism with muskets and militias”. He acknowledged that the country has differences, but threw a jab at the republican party’s idea of debate as making fun of people, which answered one of my questions.
            Most of Obama’s issues such as poverty, the deficit, global warming, gay rights, women’s equality, illegal alien voting rights, immigration, clean energy, education, and having a greater sense of unity as a nation all fell back to the modern America theme. His argument relied more on what we should expect as humans rather than citizens, and as people who hope to see the next generation have a great country to live in rather than people who want everything fixed for themselves no matter what the consequences to future generations would end up being. This answered another one of my questions about his speech, what he would bring up for the next term.
            Obama’s rhetoric was inspired to confirm the faith for those who voted in him and show those who did not that he is capable of handling the position. His style was geared toward mass appeal, which he used. As a critic however, I can see that the theme of unity was so tightly woven throughout the speech that whenever Obama said “we” it really meant “I”. Obama appeared relaxed, comfortable, and authoritative on camera. He only swallowed a few words, and he has always had a problem with the word “to”, but otherwise he has very good speech habits.
            Obama used ethos in a verbal and non-verbal way. He exuded confidence non-verbally and established ethos through confidence, his knowledge of history, accomplishments, and his intelligent and dynamic speaking habits. Part of this credibility was mentioned in something else I wondered if he would bring up, his first term. He, very early in the speech, mentioned the end of the war, possible economic recovery, and respect for the soldiers.
            The way he embraced pathos was a bit heavy for my taste. I found his mention of the “little girl” example relatable, but his mention of multiple incidents of children being killed was a bit heavy. It could have been summed up with that fact that there is a violence issue in the US. Obama put his emotions into seizing the moment and making the nation’s problems his problems.
            Obama’s speech utilized all of Aristotle’s tenants of logos, pathos, and ethos. From examining his rhetoric, it can be seen that as an orator, Obama is very good at speaking and getting his point across. His use of logos, pathos, and ethos was convincing, but not as convincing as it could have been. Overall, the speech was appropriate for a second term in office, but it could have been more dynamic in content, he could have made stronger points.

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